Brilliant! Absolutely brilliantly written and such a heart-breaking start! But at least it's the start and not the end.... I know the world's going to end and all, but I hope it won't end without them getting back together again. he he. Anyway, I love the scenario you've set up here. You've really put a great effort into writing a complete story, with back story and emotion, I can tell it's going to be good. I can't wait to read more! >.<