ext_7363 ([identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] corilannam 2010-06-23 06:33 pm (UTC)

Your attention to detail painted a vivid, devastating picture of the world coming apart. You captured the tamped down panic in this group of people that knew this was coming. Maybe being unprepared really was a blessing.

Merlin's welcome committee was completely in character, as was Arthur not being able to turn them away.

Caught a typo: He had chosen to stay behind and address his people, telling them the truth as American fell into darkness.

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