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Continued from Part 5




Once the arks had all set their courses and humanity was as safe as it could be, there was nothing left to be done except let the crew get on with their jobs. The remaining leaders of the remnant world all dispersed to find their families. For only the second time in his life, Arthur had no idea what to do with himself.

So he took Merlin's hand once again, because he could, and no one could stop him except Merlin. Merlin just blinked at him wearily, but did not pull away as they left the bridge in search of Leon.

The corridors of the ark still bustled with people, but no one gave them a second glance. Leon appeared just as Merlin was starting to tug Arthur persistently toward the smell of the galleys.

They followed him to a quiet corner of the ark. "Your stateroom, sir," Leon said as the door opened, then smiled. "I took the liberty of having Dr. Emrys's belongings moved here as well. As you were quite concerned about space earlier."

"Yes, well done," Arthur muttered.

"I have belongings?" Merlin said as Arthur shoved him inside.

Food had been brought and set up on the small table. The last time Arthur had eaten had been a quick breakfast in his rooms at Clarence House, a literal age of the world ago. While Merlin examined the room, Arthur set to and tried not to shovel the food into his mouth.

"I can't believe you sent my books." Merlin touched the medical texts that had been set up next to Arthur's mother's family Bible on the shelves over the small desk alcove.

Arthur forced himself to put his fork down before he consumed Merlin's food as well. "I went through everything you left in storage in London when you left," he said. "I had Leon send the things I thought you'd miss the most."

Merlin bowed his head and did not answer. Arthur got up and went to find his own luggage as Merlin came to sit and finish what was left of their dinner.

He dug out a clean shirt and trousers, then stood there staring at them. The wall of exhaustion had caught up with him at last, and he felt like he was standing with his nose pressed against it. His mind went blank.

His stupor was broken by warm hands on his shoulders, turning him around and tugging off his jacket. "That would be you, by the way," Merlin said, looking only at the buttons.

"What?"

"What I missed the most when I left." Merlin still did not look at him, and Arthur realized they were no longer talking about the present time. He pulled off Arthur's filthy shirt and tossed it aside. "When I got on the plane, I thought I'd feel free. But I just felt lost."

He closed his eyes and dropped his head as Merlin fumbled with his belt. "If you'd come back, we'd have found a way to work it out." God knew he had thought of a thousand compromises once it was too late.

"Maybe. But I couldn't keep changing my mind." Gently, almost clinically, he tugged Arthur's trousers open and pushed them down. "It wasn’t fair to you."

Arthur offered whatever minimal cooperation was necessary to kick off the trousers, then let Merlin push him towards the bed. He started to sit, but stopped and turned back to face Merlin.

"All right," he said. "Let's be fair to me now."

Merlin stopped halfway through pulling off his own shirt, leaving it draped over one shoulder. "What do you mean?"

"Tell me straight: are you going to stay? Or is this some sort of apocalypse reunion tour?"

"I want you," Merlin said simply. "I don't know what life is going to be like from now on, but I want to live it with you. No matter what happens."

"Even if we find survivors and Lancelot runs off to build hospitals for them?"

Merlin huffed a laugh. "Well, I might go help him build. But I would come back. Is that okay?"

Arthur nodded once, curt, embarrassed and relieved. "So there we are."

"Yeah," Merlin agreed, managing to look both joyful and like he was about to pass out. "Though if you had doubts, maybe you should have said something before you held my hand in front of Leon."

Arthur started to make a cutting retort about which one of them was the idiot in this relationship. Except that Merlin's hands were suddenly on his face, and then Merlin kissed him. It was brief and dry, and Merlin's shirt was still hanging half on and half off, but Arthur felt everything settle into place.

When they separated, Arthur lay down and closed his eyes, dizzy with exhaustion even while supine. Now that everything was done, he craved rest. Merlin finished undressing himself and climbed in beside Arthur as though they had never stopped sharing a bed. Arthur curled around him and gave in to his need for oblivion.

***

2007

He had suspected he would fall in love with Merlin the second time he woke up beside him. Merlin was sprawled half across him, sound asleep and drooling into Arthur's pillow. He stretched as well as he could without dislodging Merlin, who mumbled something, then stilled. Just like the first time, it should have felt wrong, intrusive for someone who guarded his privacy as jealously as Arthur.

Instead, just like the first time, it felt more like home than ever.

He had dismissed the feeling after their first night together. It had been one last minor rebellion against the shadow of Buckingham. That was all it was and all it could be, though he would cling to it as long as he could.

When Merlin had reappeared on his door step some weeks later, Arthur had not been surprised. The chemistry between them made an affair nearly inevitable. His own liking and growing affection for his new friend was building a consuming infatuation.

Waking up in London, Merlin's leg across his thighs, it did not feel like a secret affair. Merlin did not look out of place here in a royal house, burrowed into sheets that had never touched common flesh. It felt like they both belonged here. It felt like life.

Merlin stirred again just as Arthur was starting to drift off. He lifted his head and smacked his lips, giving Arthur a couple of bleary blinks before his face settled into resignation.

"So," he said. "That happened."

"Oh, yes, it did," Arthur agreed.

Merlin sighed and let his face plant back into the pillow.

Arthur frowned. "Look, I won't claim a great deal of experience with this sort of thing, but that wasn't quite the reaction I was expecting."

"I don't want to go," Merlin mumbled into the pillow.

"No, I wouldn't recommend it, since it's--" Arthur craned his neck to check the dim numbers on his iPod dock. "Half six in the morning."

Merlin mumbled something else. This time, the only bit Arthur caught was "jet plane."

"What was that?" he said and pinched the skin on the side of Merlin's neck. "Come on, articulate like a proper Englishman."

Merlin did lift his head at that, long enough to deliver a glare. "Why should I? You're obviously just going to be a prat about it."

"I won't." Arthur soothed the offended skin with his fingertips. "And if I am, let's face it, you obviously find that attractive."

"You left first thing. Last time." Merlin sighed and rolled onto his back, away from Arthur. "That means it’s my turn to go."

"Honestly, I'd prefer if you didn't." Arthur settled on his back as well and looked carefully up at the ceiling. "Unless you really want to."

He heard the rustle of sheets and pillows as Merlin shifted to look at him. "I don't want to. But it's not like I can be part of your life, is it?"

"Don't be ridiculous, Merlin." Something light and free bubbled up within Arthur. He did not recognize it, but he already knew he would go to great lengths to keep it. "If I want you, then you'll be in my life. It's simple enough even for you."

It was the furthest thing from simple, and they both knew it. But out of the corner of his eye, he could see Merlin starting to grin. "You want me, do you?"

Arthur took a moment to enjoy his triumph, then flipped himself over on top of Merlin. The pillows scattered as he pinned Merlin's wrists and pushed them up over Merlin's head. "I can see we're going to have to go over this again. You obviously didn't get the point last night."

"I remember getting it quite thoroughly." Merlin snickered, then widened his eyes and mouth in that way that made him look completely foolish. "But you know I'm very slow. You may have to make your point quite a lot before it really sinks in."

That stupid face of Merlin's only made Arthur want to kiss the hell out of it. So he did, and by the time the point had sunk in anew, he had made up his mind that his life would contain Merlin for all the years left of it.

***

He slept fitfully and woke too soon, wrapped tight around Merlin. Arthur fought to lie still, but sleep had gone elsewhere and left him with an aching head and racing brain. The gravity of their situation had reared up and overcome his relief at being safe and having Merlin again.

The strange hum of the ark and his own adrenaline kept Arthur from going back to sleep. When he could no longer stay still, he carefully untangled himself from Merlin and found the clean clothes he had abandoned earlier. He dressed and left Merlin still sleeping.

The corridors were quiet and dim now, a facsimile of night time though Arthur had no idea what time it actually was, wherever they now were. By now, the skies would be filled with ash from the many volcanic eruptions, rendering the distinction of daylight meaningless.

He stopped the first person he saw, a steward with a name badge that read C. Cedric. "Where are the passengers who came aboard with me?" he asked.

"Most of them are below on the mezzanine deck. Would you like me to take you, sir?"

"No, I’ll find it. Thank you." The ship would be home for the foreseeable future; he might as well get to know it.

The mezzanine deck was an open, almost cavernous space, darker than the corridor and stairwell he had just left. Arthur paused to let his eyes adjust, but even after a minute he could not make out anything human shaped in the centre of the room. With the greyness enveloping him, it felt eerily like being the last person on earth.

Then he heard a muffled whimper off to his left, and he realized that people were there, hugging the walls for whatever sense of security and shelter they could find. He took a step toward the sound.

Now that his eyes had something to focus on, his vision quickly improved. He could see the people sitting or lying against the wall. Some of them had luggage; most had nothing.

The sound had come from a Chinese man in a jumpsuit with the Cho Ming project logo on his chest. One of the ark builders, Arthur guessed as he got closer. Sweat beaded on the man’s brow, and he shifted restlessly.

Arthur knelt awkwardly next to him. "Are you all right? Is there anything I can do?"

The man looked up at him, squinting through a fever haze. He said something in Chinese, then groaned. Arthur shook his head helplessly.

"He was not feeling well this morning. He meant to go home at lunch time."

Arthur looked at the man sitting against the wall a couple of feet away and recognized the Chinese colonel he had met at the airfield. "Good thing he didn’t," Arthur said.

The colonel looked up at him, then away. "They would have left us all behind."

"I’ll find him a blanket," Arthur said and stood up quickly so as not to meet the colonel’s eyes. It had never occurred to him to wonder what would happen to all the Chinese soldiers and workers who had built their salvation from nothing.

He jogged back up to his own deck and caught Cedric the steward again. "There’s a sick man downstairs. He needs a blanket and some paracetamol."

Cedric nodded, a little impatiently. "Yes, sir. As soon as I can."

Arthur frowned. "Make that straight away."

"Yes, sir, but the other guests—"

"The other guests have warm beds and room service. These people have nothing."

Cedric’s lips thinned, but he nodded again. "Yes, sir."

"I’ll see you downstairs momentarily, then."

Arthur returned to the mezzanine and stood awkwardly over the sick man, who had quieted. He wondered if he should go wake Merlin, or even Ector. But then Cedric returned with two white tablets and a blanket emblazoned with the ark logo.

"Will there be anything else, Your Majesty?" he simpered.

Arthur arched his eyebrows in an expression of regal frost unmistakable even in this lighting. "Perhaps a glass of water? Or did the other guests drink it all?"

Cedric swallowed and at last began to look properly cowed. Arthur was glad he had not lost his touch. "Of course, sir. Water is no problem."

"And after he's had his medicine, you can start getting water and blankets for everyone else. I'll be asking them if they're hungry, so you'll want to figure out where that's going to come from as well."

A few minutes later, Arthur had a bottle of water and was kneeling at the sick man's head, trying to coax him to take the pills. "Come on," he said as the man tossed his head out of Arthur's grip and groaned again. "You'll feel much better, I promise."

He was about to groan in frustration himself when a pair of hands closed over his, relieving him of water and pills. "Here, let me." Merlin knelt on the other side of the builder and easily got his head up and the pills into his mouth. "There you go. Just a bit of water. All set."

"I had it under control," Arthur protested to hide his relief.

"Of course you did. I'm sure you only would have choked him a little bit. Nothing the Heimlich can't take care of." Merlin rolled his eyes and stood up. "I'm going to have him moved. We should limit any contagion. I want Ector to look at him, too, just in case."

"Go find my new friend Cedric," Arthur said, standing as well. "He's been very helpful."

Merlin shot him a look. "Cedric, is it?" he said. "Glad you've had time to make friends already, Arthur."

Arthur smiled to himself as Merlin moved off to corral Cedric as he staggered in with two cases of water. Then he looked along the length of the room at all the people who still needed help. Getting them here had not been enough.

He moved from person to person, making sure he spoke a few words to each of them as
he tried to ascertain their immediate needs. Some spoke English and some did not, but they all seemed glad enough to hear a friendly voice in the dark.

He had not gone far when Merlin returned to Arthur's side. "Lance and Ector will come when they finished with patients at the makeshift clinic they had set up in one of the lounges," Merlin murmured in Arthur’s ear before bending to check the next person for signs of injury or illness.

"Thank God," Arthur muttered back. "I’m certainly well out of my league."

They finally reached the far corner of the room, where Arthur crouched down next to a woman in what had once been a smart and expensive dress, clutching a bundle against her side. "How are you?" he said by rote now. "Do you need anything?"

She looked up at him, eyes wide and wet and slightly vacant, as though she lived half in nightmare. Her hand gripped his sleeve like a claw as she said something too fast for his rudimentary Italian to follow.

"Sorry." He started to shake his head before a tiny moan drew his gaze to the bundle under her arm. It was a small boy, wrapped in his mother's coat. Arthur touched his shoulder, but flinched back as the boy howled in pain.

"Uh oh, here's a problem." Merlin appeared like magic at Arthur's side. He eased the shivering boy away from this mother just enough to check him. "Oh yes, that is a broken arm, all right. Let's get that stabilized. Arthur?"

It was one of the few things Arthur knew how to do without instruction. He helped in silence, putting his hands where Merlin needed them, leaving Merlin free to babble distracting nonsense to the child.

As Merlin finished up the makeshift splint, Arthur noticed the boy staring up at him. He smiled and ruffled the boy's hair, then realized that the mother was also staring at him, wet eyes spilling over.

"Principe," she mumbled. "Principe Arturo."

Merlin helped the little boy curl back against his mother, splinted arm propped across her stomach. "No," he told her. "Il re."

"Il re," she repeated, touching Arthur's arm much more carefully this time. "Il re Artù."

***

Day 27, Month 01, Year 0001


Arthur missed the moment when the outer shielding finally lifted, though he heard Aredian give the order on the bridge. He grinned at Chancellor Tregor almost by accident. Her eyes crinkled with amusement while Bayard snorted. "We're done here," she said. "Go tell your sweetheart the good news."

He managed a careful nod of respect to each of them before hastening off the bridge, leaving them to follow more sedately through the suddenly brighter corridors of the ark. Arthur knew Merlin would be with the other ark inhabitants, eager to step out onto the decks for their first breath of fresh air from the new world. A breeze skimmed his cheek as he followed the signs to the starboard deck.

Outside, passengers packed the deck. Arthur knew most of them by sight now. They all grinned at him and parted to let him through the crowd. Friendly hands guided him in the right direction until he saw Merlin standing against the rail and chatting to Gwen.

He came up on Merlin's other side and slid his arm around Merlin's waist. The end of the world had proved an excellent time to come out. Arthur had made it clear from day two that Merlin was no servant, nor even friendly companion, but the partner and future consort of the king.

After a few shocked looks and whispers, the gossip had spread fast and died almost as quickly. Arthur was becoming a respected leader, and Merlin had made himself popular throughout the ark on his own merits as well. In the end, most people had much bigger things to worry about than Arthur’s choice of partner.

Merlin turned to him with a happy grin. "Hello, Your Majesty. How kind of you to spare time from your royal duties to join us commoners."

"Stuff it, Your Highness," Arthur returned, enjoying Gwen's giggle and Merlin's vaguely constipated look. People had spontaneously started addressing Merlin that way the second week of the voyage, to Merlin's vehement protests and Arthur's smirking delight. "Where's Lance?"

"He and Ector took two of the nurses over to the American ark." Merlin turned and waved at the other great ship that had rejoined their course, though the people on her deck were barely large enough to see. "Their doctors are short staffed with all their extra passengers, so they volunteered."

"Of course they did."

Merlin grinned at the habitual disgust in Arthur's voice. "I've been meaning to ask you--would you have tried so hard to save Lance if you'd known he wasn't my boyfriend?"

"I'd probably have tried harder," Arthur muttered, half to himself.

The subject of Lancelot held no real heat anymore. In between tending to matters of humanity, he and Merlin had spent most of the last twenty-seven days secluded in their cabin, talking, touching, and figuring out what they would have together now that their destinies were on the same path.

"What did the satellite show?" Gwen asked, her normal deference overcome by her eagerness to hear what their new world looked like.

"Good news," Arthur told her. "The waters are receding much faster than predicted. We're setting course for dry land as we speak."

Gwen cheered, and the sound rapidly spread across the deck as everyone who overheard Arthur's announcement turned to repeat it to their neighbour.

"And you'll never guess where we're going," Arthur said into Merlin's ear. He had kept the last piece of news close so he could share it first with Merlin alone.

Merlin turned his head until they were almost nose to nose. "What? Where?"

"Cape of Good Hope," Arthur said, enjoying the stunned happiness on Merlin's face. "The Drakensberg Mountains are the new roof of the world."

"But--that's so close--" Merlin opened and closed his mouth as though afraid to say anything more.

"Yes," Arthur confirmed. "The whole continent has risen. And Helmsley thinks there's a good chance it never flooded at all."

Merlin crowed and pumped his fist in the air. "I knew it! All the people we had to leave--"

"You know that's a long shot," Arthur interrupted as gently as he could. "There was still enormous seismic activity from the crust displacement."

"They're okay," Merlin said with complete, demented confidence. "I know it."

Arthur shook his head. "We'll see," he said. "We'll look all over for survivors as we go. It'll probably take some time to find a place to settle."

Merlin nudged him in the side. "If you try to colonize anyone, I’m going to hit you."

"Merlin. I have never colonized anyone in my life." Arthur gave him his most withering look.

"We'll see," Merlin mimicked, then leaned on the rail to watch as the American and Eurasian arks made the slow, graceful turn onto the new course.

Arthur leaned beside him, looking out at the ocean that no longer seemed quite so endless. They would go back to the camp, and they would see. They would find a way to survive and prosper and start everything again.

And someday, another satellite image would show that Britain had risen from the waters. Then he would take his people home.

He slung his arm around Merlin and turned to face the world.

***
END

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Date: 2011-03-11 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinkonokokoro.livejournal.com
My dear. This was lovely. I'd been afraid of seeing the film for so long because I hate end-of-the-world disasters. Specifically that have to do with drowning. But then I saw it, and it was actually a pretty good film. So I was intrigued by the concept of a Merlin 2012, and I really REALLy liked it. You wrote it fabulously, and all of the characters fit the slots well. It made me sad that Morgana died. And I actually cried when Uther gave his message and died. That's what I'd have liked to see happen for Arthur and Uther. That closure between Arthur and his father. So that was perfect and lovely.
I was, of course, glad for the happy ending for Merlin and Arthur. :) Yay!
Brilliant writing. It was great.

Date: 2011-03-12 10:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gomusing.livejournal.com
The end of the world has never been so haunting especially with the current events. This is a beautiful fic. Arthur's dilemma on being a leader and his love for Merlin and everything about the apocalypse. I'm glad the earth wasn't completely destroyed.

Date: 2011-04-08 12:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mog09.livejournal.com
Im newish to Merlin fandom and working my way through fics but just wanted to say that yours are pretty much the best Ive read!

I adored this fic - even though I ended up getting only 5 hours sleep because of it - and having seen the movie, I definitely think you improved on it and gave it a heart it didnt really have. I loved the way you got so far inside Arthurs head and the way you painted the other characters through his POV (I love tight third done well!). Morgana, Lancelot and Uther were wonderful as were the less pivotal ones all beautifully drawn.

I think my ONLY caveat at all was Merlin in this though I think you did a fabulous job of creating and sticking to a specific personality for him which was consistent throughout! To explain my own feelings bout him: I never felt this Merlin loved this Arthur with a fraction of the devotion that Arthur felt for him, which made me very glad Arthur kept his dignity after Merlin essentially dumped him. It began for me when Merlin planned to just run away when he realised Arthur was prepared to marry him because Arthur loved him THAT much, and I thought the 'prince winked at me' thing was brutal when he knew of Arthurs adoration. It actually showed how self centred this Merlin was that he didnt even realise what he'd done- that scene was brilliantly realised BTW!

I admit I actually felt disappointed when Arthur took him back pretty much instantly once he realised Lance wasn't part of the equation. I know apocalypse would concentrate Arthurs mind to grab hold while he could :p but my daft need to feel some balance had me howling 'Nooo! Make him at least TRY to make an effort for you too!'

I think the crux for me was picturing that wonderful moment you painted when Arthur had to choose the person he would save - only in reverse. I truly couldnt see him writing down Arthur's name. I could see him grandstanding about taking everyone and then refusing the chance to go, because I kind of thought that his feelings for Arthur always came a very poor second indeed to his Messiah complex. Arthur would have torn down the world to be with him; Merlin agreed to be with Arthur when it kinda fitted with his new 'lifestyle' ( for want of a better description :p). Merlin wasnt going to sacrifice anything he really wanted for Arthur; he didnt even want to try; he belittled Arthur and who he was - his royal identity - repeatedly and for all his martyr thing, when it came down to it I felt he would always choose his own wants (the Messiah thing) over Arthur, which is actually very realistic for this type of personality. In fact right to the end he just kept on throwing insane challenges at Arthur, which poor old Arthur met to try not to disappoint him, even though Merlins insistence they save everyone almost killed Arthur and did kill his two friends, which Merlin actually showed no guilt about at all. If Arthur ever slipped in his nobility and didnt come up to Merlin's expectations, what then? So kind of - in a nutshell - I'd really hate to be in love with a person like this Merlin; being in love with a person like this Arthur on the other hand would be fabulous!

APART from that though (*cough*...can you tell this Merlin kinda peed me off? :p and it was a purely personal reaction to this type of personality only) I thought the fic was utterly sublime!!! You are INSANELY talented and Im praying you write more Merlin fic by the bucketload! :-D

Date: 2011-04-22 10:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imyourheroine.livejournal.com
This is so epic. So much love for this fic. My heart hurts for Morgana and Uther but God. When they broke up. It was such an amazing angsty bit. <33333 Thank you.

Date: 2011-04-30 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashitup101.livejournal.com
Oh. Dear. God. I am shaking. The amount of times I almost burst into tears.

Oh God.

I've never actually watched that film - scared I'd start crying - but if it's half as good as this, I will remember it forever.

So much love for this ♥♥ Reccing it right now :3

Date: 2011-05-01 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erroneously111.livejournal.com
Wow. This was incredible. I've never seen the movie 2012, but the way you wrote it was just . . . unbelievably heart wrenching.

Date: 2011-05-02 12:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorientad.livejournal.com
wonderful! what an amazing story you wrote, where you mixed angst, humour, and romance. it's now one of my favorite

Date: 2011-05-20 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauren emma (from livejournal.com)
That was amazing , I had goose bumps almosst the whole time !
Aboslutely fanastic <3 !

Date: 2011-05-21 08:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drarryxlover.livejournal.com
I haven't seen the film and I was on chapter 3 before I realised that this was based on the film *blushes*

Anyway! Loved it! Absolutely heartbreakingly beautiful, I think everything was handled so well from Merlin and Arthur's meeting and break-up, Morgana's and Uther's deaths the destruction of the world and the deaths of everyone else. I'm amazed.

Date: 2011-07-18 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] califmole.livejournal.com
Found this fic through crack-van recs. An absolutely amazing story--you do such a brilliant job of capturing Arthur's heroism and despair.

And you had the helicoptered giraffe. :-D

Date: 2011-09-08 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anghain.livejournal.com
This was so sad, but so well done. And during the parts in the camp, trying to get everyone onto the plane, I felt truly scared that our heroes wouldn't make it. And even after all that, in the end, a ray of hope.

This was amazing. I read it through in one go, and I'll definitely be reading it again.

Date: 2011-10-23 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gilli-ann.livejournal.com
Wow, this made for a riveting and intense read! On the personal, private level, with the M/A relationship difficulties and break-up; - and on the grand scale, with the world ending. You handled both in an engaging and gripping way - serious, dramatic and angsty, but never going overboard with the pathos and darkness. Which fits the fact that Arthur is Prince of Wales/King of Britain... having just seen a documentary about the bombing of London during WWII I can well envisage British (fictional) royalty managing to keep this a stiff upper lip like Arthur manages here, even in the worst crisis ever, and with a human touch too. I liked your characterizations of both Arthur and Merlin, loved the intense and immediate attraction you managed to bring across, and found it realistic that there would be a lot of strain on them both in trying to keep a realtionship going under the circumstances before the apocalypse hit and made the finer points of royal etiquette rather moot.... I couldn't stop rading, this was a real page-turner!

I haven't seen "2012" but I've seen a number of other epic "End of the World" type blockbusters.I am pretty certain reading this was time much more well spent than watching the film it is based on!

Date: 2011-11-02 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] floating-fog.livejournal.com
Holly hell! that was... yeah, pretty much speechless now... loved it!
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This played out wonderfully all around. The whole story was rife with tension, right from the start, though the source of the tension shifted as it went along. Loved that bit near the end with the Italian mom and her child.

Date: 2011-12-04 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunny-rainfall.livejournal.com
this was epic. I was totally teary at the end. nice work

Date: 2011-12-16 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zedabbler.livejournal.com
Am still crying.

I really love Arthur in this story, and despite me being a Merlin-girl, I have to say I support Arthur all the way and wanted to brick Merlin's head when they separate. I couldn't even read the fun times of 2007 at all since I couldn't cheer for both.It's a conundrum. But yeay, it's a happy ending! Everyone needs a happy ending, even when the end of the world is staring you in the face.

Thanks so much for writing this, and thank you for continuing to write past the apocalypse. I enjoyed the banter....haha, Merlin being called Your Highness by the people is immensely funny. I've enjoyed everything! *goes back to rummaging in your fic archive to see if she's missed anything*

Date: 2012-04-07 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roamercorridors.livejournal.com
Wonderful story!

I love this so much!

Date: 2012-04-12 08:10 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
It's been a long time since I read this. Got a chance to read it again today and it's again made me so happy! I love the way you write. I always love the characters in your stories! <3

Date: 2012-04-23 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellecc.livejournal.com
This was unbelievably good. I pretty much inhaled it in the span of two hours. I'm a huge fan of disaster movies, and I was so excited when I found this (even though I've only seen 2012 once and not even all if it--I figured it wouldn't matter and it didn't).

Such good, perfect drama the entire way through. The breakup, Arthur finding out, Morgana's death, them leaving, Uther's death... I love a story that makes me unexpectedly cry, and this did in a few places. I wasn't sure how I'd feel about the 2007 pieces past the first one, if they'd become too disruptive, but they never did; they were a lot of fun, seeing those early moments of their relationship.

I loved how strong Arthur was--how quickly he really became a king once he'd become king. And Merlin was just perfectly Merlin the whole time.

This is so ineloquent and really doesn't properly express my love for this story. But thanks so much for writing and sharing it.

Date: 2013-03-03 11:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dianaprallon.livejournal.com
Now, years later - still, better late than never - I get to read your fic.

Which, really, is lovely - so, so, so much better than the original source, since I found 2012 cheap, with characters that had no real depth and a storyline that wasn't nearly as well developed as their special effects.

Now, I have no such complain about your story, for it has a pace and a sense of... It's hard to say exactly what, but it does come to a full circle and it is very good indeed.

One thing that I should point out is that I actually cried with Uther's death - I'm pretty sure it was the one and only time that I have seen him being the king he should and could have been if he had been less bigoted; the deep sense that he and the kingdom were one; those generally lead to a good leadership, but Uther's personal pain stopped him short from being the leader he was meant to be. This was the first time I felt that he had truly became what he was always meant to be, a true king, not only a figure head with an over-inflated ego.

And Morgana - well, I was expecting that. She would go out with a bang, wouldn't she? Doing what was right and damn the consequences, I'm sure she would have found her life a small price to pay for the world to know the truth; it was a pity that it ended up being for nothing.

Merlin was just plain stupid - then again, that's Merlin for you. The flashbacks were lovely, and made us really believe in their relationship, feel it, understand it.

Arthur was everything that he came to be, the once and future king indeed, raising to the challenges and making all of us proud. The whole end was like a Modern The Herald of a New Age; and I have seen very few Arthur's that are so deeply true to his core.

All in all, I should thank you deeply for having decided to write it, to allow us to enjoy this story and for everything else. Really, thank you. It was magnificent.

Date: 2013-09-03 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriliawu.livejournal.com
wow this is so COOL! I cant believe I just found it! the small details are so touching and I must say this is definitely better than the movie, which I fell asleeping watching... anyway, thanks for writing it :) I could reaaaaally use some comfort and happy endings after watching the last Merlin episode T.T
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