Now this - this took skill. Wow. You managed to convey such raw, demanding and intense sensuality here, much more than I would ever have imagined the subject could allow, - and perfectly shot through with that contrasting streak of wry comic relief in the person of Anhora, popping up to lecture and ogle at every opportunity. Loved how the presence and use of magic added to the story and lent in depth, and how it contributed to smoothening the way, not only for well-endowed and horny *heh* unicorns, but also for readers a tad bit cautious about a full-on bestiality fic. Impressive!
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Date: 2011-12-14 09:48 pm (UTC)